Thursday, March 26, 2009

Is this good writting???

Time. As we sit, time moves, when we run, time is our judge. There is no escape from it. Its presence causes stress and takes is toll upon the unwilling subjects and citizens obeying the minute hand. We guide our lives around a concept with no mercy. This monster was created in the cruel minds of ancient thinkers when they put a name to the never ending cycle of nights and days and sunrises and sunsets. Emotions can be driven by devious sceduals, brutal agendas, life%26#039;s vicious circle of impending, predictable doom. These are all just mere elements of the true criminal. When time casts its shadow the world falls in darkness. Time is the cocoon wrapping our ever changing world through indescribable processes. But there may never be a butterfly that can escape this paradox of ticks and tocks that consume our life%26#039;s. All we can do is wait for time to be up and for that final alarm bell to ring.
Is this good writting???
uhhm yes? of course its great


it says alot about feelings and thats great
Is this good writting???
Its very good indeed. Good range of language and sentence structures! ( no im not an English teacher hehe)
Reply:Amazing! Please, be the person who writes my obituary.
Reply:%26quot;takes is toll%26quot; - not English


sceduals - not a word





Aside from the writing that looks like thesaurus vomit, I disagree with what little is actually said beside, %26quot;look I can substitute flowery adjectives for sense.%26quot;
Reply:lol... thesaurus vomit..

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